Category: Writers Block
You always know just how to make me fall. And I like this pain, I relish this game. For in your arms I can escape to the illusion and it's getting so much harder to ignore the truth. Your whisper haunts me, your touch still graces me though I chastize my weakness, I can't turn away! And as your kiss yet again claims me, I can't help but love you. I know you're there, farther away.
fine, I'll reply to my own poem cause nobody else will :(
great poem Kayla, so well written, the last line is a bit forced, but the rest of the poem rocks.
keep writing girl!
see? this is what happens when i get no reply, I reply to myself. I hope you all are happy :) haha
Kayla that poem was awesomeawesome!
Love it!
The last line sounded a lille harsh, but other then that you did awesome!
yayayay thankies Dominique
Kayla, You know I had heard someplace along the line that it is "o.k." to talk to oneself.....but then......when one begins to answer oneself there may be a need of concern *Gins a Big Grin* ...Connie here and P.S. your writings do have a haunting mystery about them... heres to keep on penning writings...
Good poem, Kayla. Who's it about?
Saw Dom's post. His spelling sucks.
Ha. Ttyl.